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10/19 Ode to Eyes


Ev'ry eye tells a tale,
a past, a future, where you hail.


Human pupils dilating,
c'lestial; your gazes cling.


O'er the brow and lid, a slash,
pinning skin, splitting lash.


Red or yellow, black or blue,
hints to change of mind or mood.


Wolven eyes without remorse,
human tears? They're anthromorphs!


Cyborg eyes with nuts and bolts,
decorated forest cults.


A forest boy's devoid of fear,
or a boy's ice blue which holds a tear.


Eyes on a face without a scar,
or knowing battle near and far.


Striking fear in the hearts of tens,
or wheeling on a Sharingan.


Glasses, contacts, or no sight,
seeing eyes or milky white.


Changing number, emotion, hue,
varied eyes, this ode's to you!

©2006-2010 ~Krystalblood
:iconkrystalblood:

Author's Comments

Sooo I was looking around at several experienced roleplayers and was smiling at the tiny rhymes that they put, and I wanted to do one of my own. It kinda got bigger as the days progressed.

Thinking of a subject I noticed how eyes varied from shows, to mangas, to unique user creations and so on. So I kinda wrote down everything I could think about varying eyes. If you think carefully I have several favorite characters of mine vaguely explained in there ^^

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That's really creative! I can't write poetry...it comes out as something so...young. Like stuff I would write in third grade...

Anyway, keep this kind of thing up. And the rest of your writing. You've got serious talent!

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Do you believe in love at first sight, or do I have to walk by again?
:icontwiztdpsyche:
"Ev'ry"'s good... "C'lestial"'s a stretch, though.

Either way... :thumbsup:
:iconkrystalblood:
Heh, thanks guys ^^ I actually think poetry's not really easy to write. All those rhymes. x.x; Thanks anyway guyses :P

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...she says.

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